Shiratori-san, I'm so grateful that you tried to explain again your idea to me.
I think that Luna-san's right: nobody can do a work exactly like the real author would have done it. But as long as one does his or her best to respect the author's will, the homage will be good. I think that the homages in Luna-san's site are beautiful, while that man didn't care to respect the original.
Kirimi-san, thanks for answering me. I already said what I think of this version of the final chapter, and why. If you want to discuss it on Facebook, I'll be glad to give my humble opinion.
I hope that someone could read my novel. I'll make an effort to have it translated or made into a manga someday, so you can tell me what you think about it. It would be an honor to be on Luna-san's site.^^